Michelle's Sister

THE RACCOONS FAN FICTION

MICHELLE'S SISTER

Written by Stephen Ricketts, Jacob Turner & Mel Lowe

The Raccoons © Evergreen Raccoons Marketing Inc
Michelle Raccoon © Michelleraccoon
Alicia, Melanie and Zoza © Alicia Martin
Mel Raccoon © Mel Lowe
Stephen Raccoon © Stephen Ricketts


THE EVERGREEN TRAIN STATION
NARRATOR: 'The carnival was coming to the Evergreen Forest once again. But this year, the Evergreen Forest will be getting some different visitors.'
Michelle Raccoon was at the station, as the train arrived. Two raccoons stepped off the train. A girl raccoon and a boy raccoon. The girl raccoon had blonde hair, and she wore a pink shirt, blue jeans, and an orange belt. The boy raccoon wore blue glasses, a white T-shirt, blue jeans and a black belt. They were both carrying bags.
MICHELLE: (to the girl raccoon) 'Mel, you made it. Did you two have a nice journey?'
She hugged Mel, greeting her.
MEL: 'Yes, we had a nice trip here, didn't we Stephen?'
STEPHEN: (the boy raccoon) 'We sure did.'
MICHELLE: 'We'll stop by my home before we head off to the cafe. You're gonna like it there, sis. You too, Stephen. The owner is a nice dog. Doesn't yap at anyone, Stephen, so you'll be alright.'
STEPHEN: 'Thanks for the heads-up, Michelle.
They walked off as Michelle continued talking.

THE BLUE SPRUCE CAFE
Bert, Ralph, Melissa, Lisa and Bentley were all there, sitting at a table, having something to eat.
BERT: (holding up his sandwich) 'Who loves peanut butter sandwiches?'
LISA: 'Aww here it goes.'
BERT: 'Bert loves peanut butter sandwiches.'
RALPH/ MELISSA: 'Is it true?'
BERT: 'Mmm-hmm. I do I do I do I do I do…'
LISA: (covering Bert's mouth) 'Alright Buster, we got the message. Now eat your sandwich.'
She let go of Bert's mouth.
BERT: 'Yes ma'am.'
Michelle walked in with Stephen and Mel behind her. Michelle walked up to the other raccoons.
MICHELLE: 'Hi guys. I'd like you to meet my sister Mel. And her boyfriend, Stephen.'
RALPH: 'Hi you two. Welcome to the Evergreen Forest.'
MELISSA: 'We hope you enjoy it down here.'
STEPHEN: 'Thanks.'
MEL: 'I'm sure we'll have fun down here.'
Michelle, Mel and Stephen walked up to the counter where Schaeffer was.
SCHAEFFER: 'What'll it be, Michelle?'
MICHELLE: 'Three chocolate milkshakes please. (To Mel and Stephen) You guys hungry?'
STEPHEN: 'Yes.'
MEL: 'We sure are.'
MICHELLE: (to Schaeffer) 'We'll have something to eat as well.'
MEL: 'We can have a picnic.'
MICHELLE: (to Schaeffer) 'We'll have some food to go.'
SCHAEFFER: 'I'll go and get the menus.'

THE SNEER MANSION
Cyril was walking up and down in the lobby.
CYRIL: 'Where are those Pigs? I texted their cell phone an hour ago.'
The Pigs ran in.
PIGS: 'We're here, Boss.'
CYRIL: 'Did you idiots get my message?'
LLOYD: 'We did, but we couldn't understand it.'
CYRIL: 'What do you mean you couldn't understand it?'
LLOYD: (looking at his cell phone) 'It said "Pigs B A the mansion A 12 pmm sharp".
The text message on the phone said "pigs b @ the mansion @ 12 pm sharp".
CYRIL: 'Don't you pigs understand text talk? I said "Pigs be at the mansion at twelve PM sharp". It's now five past one!'
The pigs looked upset.
CYRIL: 'I knew this phone texting was such a bad idea, at least when it comes to texting three brainless fools. At least I picked up modern text talk quicker than you three walking sausages. Now why are you late? We've got a carnival to help set up.'
LLOYD: 'That's why we're late. Princess Alicia and her sisters called us to help Lady Baden-Baden, Mr. Knox and Master Cedric set up the carnival.'
CYRIL: 'What? And you left me behind? Why didn't you text me?'
FLOYD: 'We don't know how.'
Cyril pulled his ears and screamed in frustration.

EVERGREEN LAKE
Michelle, Mel and Stephen all had a picnic there. Bert, Lisa and Bentley joined them on the picnic too.
BERT: 'Thanks for inviting us on the picnic, Michelle.'
MICHELLE: 'You're welcome Bert.'
LISA: (to Stephen and Mel) 'So, you guys are autistic too?'
STEPHEN: 'Yes.'
MEL: 'That's how we found each other. We met on the internet.'
MICHELLE: 'It's nice you guys  were able to make contact on the internet.'
BENTLEY: (looking upset) 'Good for you guys. I once met this girl online, and my mother forbid me to go see her. Lisa wouldn't take me either. She chose mom's side. And two days later she disappeared.'
LISA: (to the others) 'We found out she was a paedophile, and was arrested. (To Bentley) It's a good thing we got her address, and sent the police to investigate. Otherwise they wouldn't have caught her! And if we went ourselves, we might have never came back!'
BENTLEY: 'Alright already! Now that you put it that way, I'm glad we didn't go!'
MICHELLE: 'When did this happen?'
LISA: 'Sometime before you moved to the forest.'
STEPHEN: 'What gave her true self away?'
LISA: 'She called herself  Suzanna Savannah, and the address she gave us said "Ontario". And according to Wikipedia, she really lives in Los Angeles. Bentley had a crush on Suzanna back then.'
MICHELLE: 'Suzanna Savannah?'
LISA: 'I guess you could say she's the animal equivalent to Hannah Montana. One difference is Suzanna Savannah is her real name.'
STEPHEN: 'Interesting. What animal is she?'
LISA: 'A fox.'
STEPHEN: 'Amazing. I guess she's not well known in the UK. I mean I've hardly seen any records or CDs of that singer.'
MICHELLE: 'Same with Lisa Lougheed.'
MEL: 'At least we can see their music videos on YouTube.'
STEPHEN: (looking up) 'Is that a carnival?'
The others looked up at what Stephen was looking at.
MICHELLE: 'Yeah, the carnival's coming up.'
BERT: 'I'm looking forward to going on the rides again.'
MEL: 'When we've finished our picnic, shall we head to your place, Michelle? I feel like playing D-D-R.'
MICHELLE: 'Me too. So it's a yes.'
The raccoons cheered.

MICHELLE'S HOME
Michelle and Mel played D-D-R on Michelle's Nintendo Wii, and Stephen, Bert, Lisa and Bentley sat on a couch, watching them dance. Michelle and Mel danced to "Hold Back Tomorrow" by Lisa Lougheed.
MEL: 'Yay, I got an A.'
MICHELLE: 'I got double A.'
MEL: 'Oh darn it.'
They both giggled. Stephen clapped at them.
LISA: 'Hey Mel can I play against you? I've played this with Michelle many times, and I think I'm getting the hang of it.'
MEL: 'Sure.'

THE CARNIVAL
The Sneer limo stopped by, and Cyril and the Pigs stepped out. Cedric, Sophia, Mr. Knox, Lady Baden-Baden, Alicia, Melanie and Zoza were all there, supervising the people setting up the carnival.
CYRIL: 'So, everyone's ready for carnival night?'
CEDRIC: 'Yes Pop.'
SOPHIA: 'We certainly are.'
CYRIL: 'That's great.'
Lloyd and Alicia hugged each other.
ALICIA: 'Are you looking forward to it?'
LLOYD: (blushing) 'Yes I am.'
ALICIA: 'I can't wait to ride on the Ferris wheel.'
CYRIL: 'Wait a minute. Are those Chipmunks gonna be here performing another one of their concerts?'
BADEN-BADEN: 'Not this time, Mr. Sneer.'
MR. KNOX: 'So you won't have to listen to them this time. They have a benefit concert elsewhere.'
All of a sudden they heard motorbikes in the distance.
CYRIL: 'Now what?'
Two bikers showed up on their bikes. They stopped by the limo and got off. They took off their helmets, revealing their faces. They were Wendo and Toof.
CYRIL: 'You guys?'
TOOF: 'Hi Mr. Sneer.'
CEDRIC: 'Wendo. Toof. Glad you guys can make it.'
CYRIL: 'Cedric. Don't you remember these bikers broke into our house?'
CEDRIC: 'I know, but they've changed, ever since Bix put them in serious danger. He's still doing time in prison.'
WENDO: 'He's right, Mr. Sneer.'
CYRIL: 'Very well. I'll let you guys carry on. Come on Pigs.'
BOYD: 'Can we stay here, with our friends?'
Cyril turned to see Alicia, Melanie and Zoza.
CYRIL: 'Very well. I'll drive back home without you guys.'
Cyril got in the limo and drove off.
TOOF: 'I can't wait to see Bert again.'
CEDRIC: 'Wendo, Toof, this is my wife, Sophia.'
SOPHIA: 'Hi, guys. (shaking Wendo's hand) Cedric's told me all about you.'
WENDO: 'Thanks.'
TOOF: 'Gosh Cedric, you two are married?'
CEDRIC: 'Yup. For two years now.'
SOPHIA: 'And help run the family business.'
WENDO: 'No kidding.'

THE CARNIVAL NIGHT
NARRATOR: 'After a coupler of days of preparations, the carnival was up and running.'
The raccoon gang were all there. Bert was with his friends, Cedric, Wendo and Toof. Mel and Stephen were with Michelle, Lisa, Sophia, Bentley and Penny.
MICHELLE: 'What do you wanna go on first?'
STEPHEN: 'I don't know. I don't wanna go on the Ferris wheel.'
LISA: 'We can go to the arcade.'
STEPHEN: 'They have an arcade here?'
MEL: 'Hope they have those crane machines, or D-D-R.'

MUSIC SCENE: CURTIS KING JR: Missing It
They all ran to the arcade area. Mel and Stephen went on the crane machine, and they both won meerkat plush toys. Lisa and Michelle played on the Dance Fusion machine. Lloyd and Alicia rode on the Ferris wheel. Bentley and Penny had some cotton candy. Wendo, Toof and Bert all had hotdogs. Cyril and Ingrid, and Mr. Knox and Lady Baden-Baden, they played on one of the water pistol games.
NARRATOR: 'That night, the evergreen community had fun at the carnival. And Mel and Stephen both enjoyed their stay at the Evergreen Forest. And one day, they might visit again.'

EVERGREEN TRAIN STATION: TWO DAYS LATER
The raccoons were all there, including Cedric and Sophia. Michelle hugged Mel.
MICHELLE: 'I hope you two have a safe journey back to England.'
MEL: 'Thanks sis.'
STEPHEN: 'It was nice meeting all of you guys.'
They got on the train, and it left the station.
LISA: (to Michelle) 'I bet when they get back home, they'll write about their stay on DeviantArt, right?'
MICHELLE: 'Right. Or Facebook.'
BERT: 'You know, Stephen's an okay guy.'
BENTLEY: 'Yeah. Hey guys, I'm hungry. Wanna go to the cafe?'
LISA/ BERT/ MICHELLE/ CEDRIC/ SOPHIA: 'Yeah.'
They all walked off.
BERT: 'I'm in the mood for a peanut butter sandwich. Who loves peanut butter?...'
LISA: (laughing) 'Cut it out, Bert.'
BERT: 'Sorry Lisa.'


THE END


MUSIC
LISA LOUGHEED: Hold Back Tomorrow
CURTIS KING JR: Missing It


8.8.2010